| 2015-02-17 05:31:37 |
How I Got a Harem: The X-mas party
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Mr. Reader, you posted your story August 31, 2010. Today is February 16, 2015. Many years after you posted this story. From Sept 3, 2010 " not very good compared to the other two. I think you rushed this one too much. Even though the girls were plastered, they welcomed a 3rd girl way too easily " Many of your fans want more detail , slower pace, and personalities of the people. |
| 2015-02-07 23:43:20 |
Playing Truant
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" Instead he was having a coffee, while eyeing up the three fit birds next to him. " Mr. Writer everywhere else the females are labeled girls. Here on the West Coast I hear " look two hot chicks " . I do not know why girls are called chicks here and birds in England. |
| 2015-02-08 00:06:19 |
Her best friends Husband
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Wow, the birth of a threesome. Excellent & well done. |
| 2015-02-08 00:45:59 |
What happens on the Stag Do...
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Mr. Writer you posted this amazing story July 23, 2014. Looking at your dozen or so stories none are sequels, none are a series of 1, 2 & 3. Sadly it seems not your style. Today is February 7, 2015. Part 2 could be a threesome or a win-win-win. |
| 2015-02-08 01:14:50 |
Victoria & Rodger, enemates
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" This Is the only "Romance Story" that I've written " wirepaladin. Maybe a follow on story focused on the honeymoon would grab Vernocia Barnets attention ? |