| 2015-03-16 17:44:58 |
A Slut comes home (Camp Slut Series- Chapter 6)
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I like the evolution of the story, just curious, did you mean for Elizabeth to call Michael Michelle? Is that a dom thing or a typo? |
| 2015-10-09 16:28:26 |
The Office Junior - Part 14
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Thank you for continuing this story. Nice cliff hanger, hopefully the next chapter comes soon. |
| 2018-05-04 21:04:31 |
“Daddy, can Paige stay over tonight?”
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Not bad, but you really need to proof read and spellcheck. |
| 2018-09-25 18:30:46 |
The Chauffeur(#1)......the Interview
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Well written and a good start. Watch your proof reading and I look forward to more. |