| 2007-02-23 16:02:37 |
my mates mum
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it needs more detail and check ur spellin |
| 2007-05-07 15:24:01 |
my mates mum
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I got the drift of what you were saying. I'd grade you a -2 on sp(you know). More attention to detail would make it hotter also. I use notepad or one of them, save drafts and then go back (without Fosters) and clean em' up. Good, Bob |
| 2007-05-20 16:21:27 |
my mates mum
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when l read the start of this story,and he says this is fucken true.lts ballshit all the way through |
| 2005-01-29 16:37:14 |
My Test
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Proper punctuation was invented to separate the morons from the human species. |
| 2005-01-30 15:45:12 |
My Test
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Punctuation and spelling. otherwise a very hot story, made me leak. a 10 |