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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-02-16 20:06:32 | Play With It, Sis | damn that made so cum soooo fucking hard...more of this story!!!! |
| 2005-02-24 18:20:19 | Play With It, Sis | My got, i'm cumming. any1 wanna, with me? I Loved it! |
| 2005-03-31 05:41:54 | Play With It, Sis | That was fucking hot, i better get a towl.... |
| 2005-04-10 14:37:28 | Play With It, Sis | .......whoa |
| 2005-04-15 05:34:09 | Play With It, Sis | I like your writing, but I have two suggestions. 1) for me the biggest attraction of your story is the fact that the sister in the story is only 11. Why don't you make the most of this? You could tell us more about how her immature breasts look and feel, and how smooth and hairless her pussy is ... how tight it was when you first got in ... Also, work a bit harder on thinking about how you seduced her. Here she actually seduced you. That's less realistic. Your story would be even more enjoyable if the guy in the story had to be pretty persuasive to get the little girl to let him touch her breasts and pussy. Anyway, those suggestions are only meant to be constructive. Do write some more ! |