| 2005-01-29 21:00:20 |
Nude Beach University
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NBU. Now that's an original concept! Don't be disappointed by the score of 3.75. Most of the pricks who read stuff on this site wouldn't recognise good writing. Mind u, chicks jacking off doesn't do much for my libido. |
| 2005-01-30 10:54:51 |
Nude Beach University
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Thanks, D.D. Although I didn't think this story was spectacular, I thought it was better than a 3.75 rating. I was starting to question my own writing skills, which I think are ok actually. |
| 2005-05-30 22:44:36 |
Nude Beach University
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This thing sucked i mean dont get me wrong girl jacking either me or them selves off i great |
| 2005-12-02 17:48:04 |
Nude Beach University
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very good add on to it make sex in the classroom ot something idk keep on writing though! 9/10 |
| 2006-05-25 02:14:55 |
Nude Beach University
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All the co-eds were mesmerized by his penis, really? every last one of them? who did the survey? because i've never known 'all' to agree on 'anything'. i don't like 'veiny' penises. No one else had a grip on us like our professor did. Again, was a survey conducted? Good story, well written, and the Nude Beach University thing is unique enough to be sexy. You have talent as a writer, but stay away from categorizing 'all', because 'all' is never going to true. For example, 'all woman want brad pitt' isn't accurate. i think he's boyish. 'all men want jessica simpson' isn't accurate either. i think she's dumb. do you see what i'm saying? good story other than that little flaw. |