| 2005-03-22 22:23:36 |
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good story make a part 2 at least, make the girl start to enjoy the things she does. |
| 2005-03-29 06:30:43 |
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yeah dat wernt bad- well written an all, 7/10,,,pimping tho....tis unrealistic bearing inmind that they is close and she is clever,....plot needs some thinkin dude |
| 2005-03-29 14:55:57 |
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Well, good story! Character development is ok. I question high school kids doing what these do though? Keep writting, it only gets better! Cheers! |
| 2005-03-31 14:43:54 |
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That was actully pretty good, best i've read in a while.. 9/10 can't wait for part 2 |
| 2005-04-01 01:13:38 |
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dude that was by far a 10 awesome work I want part two |