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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-09 16:04:40 | Happy birthday Connie | spelling was awful...it stammered and mase no sense at all...i guess you found our you should never a be a writer... i give it -10/10 |
| 2006-03-07 12:55:13 | Happy birthday Connie | I saw past the spelling and grammar to the story. It does need fleshing out and some of the scenes were a bit abrupt with no linkage. Considering it was her first time the writer should have made Franky more considerate and to go from a virgin to next day up for it in the hayloft is too quick. she should have made Franky earn the pleasure. |
| 2006-10-17 06:34:53 | Happy birthday Connie | Nice, a cherry gonr to cherry heaven, broken but not destroyed, Good story interesting, more of a book report than a story. |
| 2006-12-05 02:04:25 | Happy birthday Connie | Hey little girl, I happen to love giving and receivimg oral sex, my last playmate told mr I shoould stop after she had trouble wallking to the potty=palace. I just grinned, because I did it right. |
| 2005-01-30 20:02:24 | Japanese Houseboy Serves | sicko |