| 2005-02-21 14:43:06 |
Me and Aunty
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I dont know if you'll read this but yur story sucked. there is no rythym, terrible spelling, and nnooo continuity of action. learn to write dummy, i didn't even rate this story |
| 2005-02-25 08:43:16 |
Me and Aunty
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Donno how to write dont write the story sucks,you dont even know what a wash basin is ?? |
| 2005-03-04 21:11:26 |
Me and Aunty
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ur story sucks my nuts... |
| 2005-03-11 19:29:20 |
Me and Aunty
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the story was gay... even tho it was a male n a female... |
| 2005-06-04 21:39:16 |
Me and Aunty
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best story evewr dont give a fuck whta every body else says |