| 2005-02-14 23:58:12 |
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Great job execpt for a few things like at the top when you went from first persion to omnipitant made it hard to follow. And there a few times that he will be makeing love to one girl and suddenly on the next line its a diffrent gril confuseing but other than that great job glad to see another. |
| 2005-02-15 13:07:49 |
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meh. shoot for originality man. 5/10 |
| 2005-02-16 01:03:30 |
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Man screw you guys this was a good story I would like to see you write one this long. You guys don't even know what you are talking about. |
| 2005-02-19 11:13:54 |
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STORIES WITHOUT PICTURE MEANINGLESS! |
| 2005-04-03 15:25:20 |
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tooo good go for a movie |