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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-03-21 17:02:43 | THE MASTER_(0) | Too many exclamation marks. One suffices, if necessary at all. |
| 2005-05-21 23:56:30 | THE MASTER_(0) | what the fuck does ?}? mean? |
| 2005-06-06 22:13:13 | THE MASTER_(0) | This story Sucks |
| 2006-01-13 23:19:23 | THE MASTER_(0) | Far too many exclamation marks. Explore punctuation and paragraph placement - it makes writing far more legible. |
| 2004-03-28 16:51:48 | PLAY THINGS_(0) | this story sucks ass!!! |