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2005-02-06 17:20:58 | What happens in Vegas... | Koyaanisqatsi, interesting screen name, I'm sure you know it means Life out of Balance in Hopi. I wonder how many people know the Amygdala is a part of the brain related to emotions. As for the story, I thought is was very good, one of two I've given a 10, The Camp Nurse being the other. |
2005-02-06 17:41:42 | What happens in Vegas... | Pretty much the only story i got satisfaction out of. Not sexual satisfaction...(well maybe once or twice;)) but it had a story to it. it wasnt juss fucking it had...er....im lacking vocabulary at the moment but this was great. You describe things perfect and its quite easy to read. Im looking forward to more and i likehow its longer than most other stories. GJ |
2005-02-06 17:46:56 | What happens in Vegas... | great story really. I hope it's not true, because it would be a sick decision for a mother and a son to make, the one they make in the end. But the thing is beautifully told anyway. 10/10 in erotic litterature, 1 or 2/10 in real life move. Constructive criticism or lavish praise? Well you're very good at it. Writing I mean. Keep it up;-) As for suggestions, a little more feelings from the part of the main character, before the final puking scene, especially during the hunt and flirt phases, would have been better. It was like "i'm a dick looking for a cunt and i have no feelings nor depth to talk about" and the rest of the story proves you do have some, so why not your character? Tell us what he feels, and why. Ii want to hear what he is living through above the waist line too. |
2005-02-06 22:55:26 | What happens in Vegas... | Awesome feedback, everybody. Thanks so much. I have two more stories pending that really get into the minds of the characters. I think they're probably my best yet (Awakening of a BBW, and Relocating to Texas), and were a joy to write. I hope you all like them. |
2005-02-07 03:52:44 | What happens in Vegas... | omg.... it sucks so bad |