| 2005-03-25 10:00:23 |
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i love this story |
| 2005-03-26 14:21:33 |
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FUCK U U FUKIN HOMO>>>GO TO HELL U CHILD MOLESTING FUK...nice story |
| 2005-03-26 22:49:34 |
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This story would have been much better if you made the girls look their age instead of stretching it so much. Also, there were many spelling errors, and many times when words were left out entirely. Maybe you should consider taing a creative writing and grammatics course to help crrect your faults. However, the story was decent all in all. My rating is 6/10. |
| 2005-03-26 23:48:44 |
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I know two gorgeous twins...except they're my age. |
| 2005-03-26 23:57:06 |
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I know two gorgeous twins..except they're my age. |