| 2005-06-06 17:37:25 |
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Good story all around I agree c-cups too big |
| 2005-06-23 18:21:28 |
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Good story, a little unrealistic. should have made girls older or else given them smaller breasts and perhaps a little more innocence. also to many uhhh's one or two would have been alright didn't need them every two lines. however all in all a good story |
| 2005-07-14 20:17:57 |
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you wanker |
| 2005-07-14 20:25:14 |
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I have to agree with maltesdude. Not realistic. It was a good story line but could have been a great one |
| 2005-07-16 11:48:07 |
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.... If you write a sequel I will kill you myself... crap like this doesn't deserve a second chance. Anyone with half a clue that has written a comment here has said you are lacking reality factor, and that is true. From what I can see you are just a sad old dude wanting young looking girls with large breasts.... and that just don't happen pal |