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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-10 00:05:07 | New start 2 | Im sorry but your grammar is terrible. Katies looked into her gorgeous eyes "its okay abby... it'll never happen again okay? Your mine now" Katies took Shelleys naked body into hers and hugged her tightly. I thought her name was Shelly, not Abby. Continue writing but check your grammar first. |
| 2006-08-11 23:49:53 | New start 2 | it tastes like meatloaf |
| 2007-01-23 01:36:07 | New start 2 | So she forgot to unplug the camera, didn't she get it from the closet? What kind of fucking camera is this. Real shitty story. |
| 2005-02-13 10:54:32 | french quarter fuck | sexy plot. some typos, would like to read more |
| 2005-02-25 21:41:32 | french quarter fuck | Very good story, but too short, spend a few more words describing the pussy lick, and... the fuck scene. You've some good ideas, just develop them in more detail. r |