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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-11-07 19:48:42 | Violation of Leslie Amadeus | I am glad I found your story. I came three times. Now you keep your end of the bargain and fuck your bald cunt with your monster dildo. I am off to read your others. I hope they are as good as this one. |
| 2005-11-08 07:25:34 | Violation of Leslie Amadeus | Sounds like it was written by a dude and not very well at that. I don't see it as being any better than a 2/10 |
| 2005-11-08 08:23:11 | Violation of Leslie Amadeus | that was fucking awesome keep writing |
| 2005-11-08 19:43:54 | Violation of Leslie Amadeus | This story has a lot of potential, but sadly fails to meet it. It isn't very well written, and is hard to read. Being the grammer whore I am, your writting is filled with errors ranging from miss-spelled words, sentance run-ons, no sentance breaks, and the like. Still, I applaud you for trying your best, that's all anyone can ask for, you know? Just revise the story a bit, correct the grammer errors, and it should be a great piece of writting. Good luck! |
| 2005-11-15 01:45:39 | Violation of Leslie Amadeus | Not sure if it is a "true story", but I like it!!! |