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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-09 23:36:48 | Good-two shoes, part 3 | Not too bad. A little more on the details wouldn't hurt, but it was definately erotic and exciting. Keep writing-if this is an early work, you're off to a good start ;) |
| 2005-12-23 20:29:28 | Good-two shoes, part 3 | better than the last two. what you should have happen is that Kerry leaves James and starts choosing who she fucks. And do more lesbian action -- that's hot! |
| 2006-01-04 16:58:30 | Good-two shoes, part 3 | mostly agree with DDB, could use a little more description. and maybe james should start using emily for money? he could sell them both to men and women alike...just a thought |
| 2006-02-05 21:14:29 | Good-two shoes, part 3 | i agree wit big d you shoulda included clit-ford the big red dog |
| 2006-04-02 12:15:34 | Good-two shoes, part 3 | You need to pay attention to the name's. Otherwise, a great story. |