| 2005-03-11 05:51:45 |
Home For a Weekend
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Nice 8 |
| 2005-03-12 02:58:21 |
Home For a Weekend
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dude great story, thats all i can say. should have a little more foreplay |
| 2005-03-14 02:14:08 |
Home For a Weekend
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Not believable. Badly written. Many random thoughts do not add up to a story. Take more time and do a better job. |
| 2005-03-14 14:32:18 |
Home For a Weekend
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Nice fantasy, 2 15yr olds, all night and probably some more in the morning....in someone else's house? We all love JB, but this is a stetch. |
| 2005-03-15 16:28:32 |
Home For a Weekend
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you little fuck. i wrote this story already, and it was better the first time!! See my list and read it. You'll understand why i'd give you a 4/10. |