| 2005-03-08 08:41:13 |
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loved the story but feel including a sence of raping would do better |
| 2005-03-08 17:57:57 |
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123, you're not gettin the 'TRUE' part, if rape was put in it wouldn't be 'TRUE'. Besides that wouldn't make it as good, except to you. Great story as it is |
| 2005-03-08 19:04:31 |
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I would like if your story was spaced better and if you made it just a little bit more real. Other then that the story was great I loved it. Good job 8/10 |
| 2005-03-08 19:40:49 |
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Your father is one sick puppy and I hope a law officer come to your wedding, and when the preacher asks if there is anyone objecting to the marriage, he arrests your dad and puts him in jail, and while he's in there, the other inmates cut his balls off and feed them to him. |
| 2005-03-09 05:46:28 |
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you story sucked!!! one of the worst ever!!! ur a sick slut. you seriously need therapy. our world is fucked up as it is. your dad is one sick perv. and i bet this shit is all made up!!!!!!! |