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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-07-24 13:31:01 | Wrinkles in Time Part 4 (long) | 9 out of 10 ...had a take .0001 of a point away for a typo. So I just rounded it down. Damn near perfect fiction. The whiners are mostly other authors here who can't write half as well and know it. Regardless in this case their jealousy is a testimonial as to the greatness of this story. Bravo! |
| 2005-07-25 18:45:30 | Wrinkles in Time Part 4 (long) | You docked me for leaving out an 'at'? |
| 2005-07-26 21:26:43 | Wrinkles in Time Part 4 (long) | Hey, now that petty I am not either ...it was an "at" and a missing "e" in a word :) ...truly great ending for a great book in all seriousness. bela I'm coming ~and on to the next one~ |
| 2005-07-28 11:57:09 | Wrinkles in Time Part 4 (long) | I don't doubt that I left off an 'e'. I spend so much time on the computer that I get crosseyed sometimes. Seriously in need somebody to proof read this stuff. LOL Dan K |
| 2005-03-02 18:46:10 | A Quiet Walk in the Country | TOO VIOLENT |