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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-03-11 12:39:32 | Turn me on | Yea, I liked it - got my pussy nice and wet. But gosh, I think Devin should have put some cock into Becky - after all she certainly deserved more than a finger fuck after giving so much help with Rachel's orgasm. Or maybe Rachel could have sucked Becky's cunt in appreciation!? |
| 2005-03-11 21:49:26 | Turn me on | Hot fucking story, I gave u a 10 for content. However, your spelling needs work. and a few more paragraphs. otherwise it did my pseudo. r |
| 2005-03-12 04:56:29 | Turn me on | very good write more stories |
| 2005-03-12 18:34:20 | Turn me on | Good story. Needs more work tho. The stuff buiding up to the orgasm needs to be longer. Exposition needs to be longer too. Write a part 2. 5/10 |
| 2005-03-13 06:01:42 | Turn me on | Pretty good, but you need to go more in depth with the storyline, etc. I give it 8/10 for content though. |