| 2005-03-18 17:11:22 |
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B. J. for medical reasons .....I like it. Wish I had a friend like her. |
| 2005-03-18 21:01:30 |
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No, no, no! Work on grammar, punctuation, and story line. You wrote many big very long sentences that went on and on without a break from one thought to another, making everyone hold their breath waiting for an ending to the thought which never came, because of a big long series of words with no period. |
| 2005-03-21 13:13:27 |
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Hi Shit Detector - I don't know where you went to school, where I was educated we were taught English. Sorry I didn’t keep it to words of one or two syllables for you and that the sentences were longer than three or four words. Perhaps you would prefer me to re-write it with a line of space after each sentence so you don’t have to look out for full stops. |
| 2005-03-21 15:05:51 |
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that was very good! makes me wanna suck Ahmeed |
| 2005-03-21 22:41:07 |
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Sammy, it's obvious that you don't know where I went to school, I don't live near detroit. Don't try to correct my English when you write like a moron. |