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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-03-11 22:02:54 | Avalanche | How lame can u get? Trapped in a cave? Come on, write something believable, your witing tech- nique is not bad, but your story line sucks. |
| 2005-03-15 18:27:52 | Avalanche | Wheres da fire mon. Chill out and get into da story more. Develop it! |
| 2005-03-20 22:35:09 | Avalanche | This sucked |
| 2005-07-15 00:10:47 | Avalanche | it was ok you need more detale |
| 2005-03-11 16:18:02 | Granny and Grandson | sick |