| 2005-03-16 21:53:01 |
My Sister's Friends
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Good story, but it switched from first person to third person midway through. |
| 2005-03-16 22:33:37 |
My Sister's Friends
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Not only did he switch from first to third person, but Brandon turns into Brendon at the same point. |
| 2005-03-16 23:42:21 |
My Sister's Friends
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hurry up and make chapter 2 this is good!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2005-03-17 00:33:53 |
My Sister's Friends
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You really should keep this story going. The comments at the beggining and end are true to if u dont like fiction dont read fuck stories... because that is all they are someones fantasy brought to life on paper! |
| 2005-03-17 01:33:12 |
My Sister's Friends
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dude that was soo fuuucking good make more stories but make it so like next one is a gang bang and the sister doesnt want to with her friends but after the gang bang she does him by herself |