| 2006-01-04 03:57:39 |
My Sister's Friends
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well knowing how painfully big that was and completely unrealistic I couldn't get wet....no discription, and even if a boy magicalls had that it's not like the girl would feel all the pleasure....I'll say it was good for your first.....the only compliment I could muster....needs more discription though... |
| 2006-01-05 12:57:26 |
My Sister's Friends
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very good would like to see more |
| 2006-01-07 20:58:02 |
My Sister's Friends
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nice very nice 10/10 the best iv ever read but if i had to give advice for your next story try to be more descriptive with the sexual parts and then your story will be amazing!!!! |
| 2006-01-09 12:05:02 |
My Sister's Friends
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This was a very good story. Nice and long. I also think you are a great writer. 10/10 GOOD JOB |
| 2006-02-23 14:54:44 |
My Sister's Friends
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Loved it. Keep going. |