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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-27 17:33:50 | me my brother and his freinds 2 | Okay, Britney, first of all, to take up bandwidth with a sloppily written story and then tell everyone not to "piss and moan about spelling or grammar" is tantamount to somebody making an out-of-focus movie with crappy lighting and garbled sound (there's a lot of THAT out there too) and then expecting people to sit through it and actually be entertained! If you don't feel the need to put a little effort into your writing, how can you possibly expect anyone to "get off on it" or even bother wading through it?! If you "really don't care" why do you even bother? As for the story itself, well, it didn't even read like an erotic interlude. It came across as little more than a shock-fest exhibition (yawn). |
| 2006-04-24 20:04:01 | me my brother and his freinds 2 | u ass hole there is the same story in 2 different titles |
| 2006-08-17 22:11:37 | me my brother and his freinds 2 | YUCK!!! How disgusting. |
| 2006-10-07 14:01:20 | me my brother and his freinds 2 | im sorry but how am i supposd to enjoy the story if the grammer SUCKS |
| 2006-10-12 21:47:15 | me my brother and his freinds 2 | U r very good ur stories make me cum like hell tammy , Superd writer I also write well and dont bore people |