| 2005-04-01 11:36:13 |
Desk Set
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Very well written. Descriptive language, good flow, the characters nicely drawn. And HOT! BTW, if you ever get a job like that, get your own coffee! |
| 2005-04-01 15:08:12 |
Desk Set
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great story,we shoul d all be so lucky.did you ever eat her out? nothing like eating a mature cunt |
| 2005-04-02 05:47:23 |
Desk Set
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Very well written, and to be aproved by Kimiko, who is also a very good writer is great flattery. |
| 2005-04-02 08:17:53 |
Desk Set
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I thank you for all your kind comments. I will be writing more soon. |
| 2005-04-05 01:28:45 |
Desk Set
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Nice story, well written and just the right length. Keep up the good work! |