| 2005-03-28 12:42:28 |
Tammy and Steve
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this story sucks so much... there is hardly any excitement |
| 2005-04-11 18:25:28 |
Tammy and Steve
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Very good story. Does it come from experience? Anyway check out a few words, they need to be spelled properly, Words like fallow and finely. Can't wait to see more |
| 2005-06-29 21:11:36 |
Tammy and Steve
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That was an excellent story, I hope you make part 2. Maybe you can bring her friends in to join the fun. Congratulations, 10/10 |
| 2005-03-25 03:23:23 |
massage too far
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This really was a bad story! What is going on with the good writers at this site? |
| 2005-03-25 15:50:32 |
massage too far
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use spellcheck dickhead! 1/10 |