| 2005-04-01 03:01:07 |
A Staring Contest with Her Ass Part 2
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Poor grammar, poor punctuation. It was not ready for publication. Put more work into it next time. |
| 2005-04-02 16:38:56 |
A Staring Contest with Her Ass Part 2
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I agree with the Shit Detector. 3/10 |
| 2005-04-03 07:14:18 |
A Staring Contest with Her Ass Part 2
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not one of the best bt decent 6/10 |
| 2005-04-03 21:03:20 |
A Staring Contest with Her Ass Part 2
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that was the best story ive evr read keep it up |
| 2005-04-05 17:56:24 |
A Staring Contest with Her Ass Part 2
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Don't listen to Shit Detector, he is retarded. There were very few grammar and punctuational errors..It was a really good story. Well structured and believable..Nice Job. |