| 2005-04-02 22:49:30 |
Nasty Girl
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Brilliant! fantastic! one of the most captivating stories i've seen on this site to date. finally, a story for the sophisticated pervert. none of that silly 'oh fuck me bobby fuck me hard.' apparentely, according to your fans, i must read your others; obviously they're as good as this. and, for critic 3, there must be an asshole where your mouth should be, had your mother not been a drunken whore. there was not supposed to be a storyline! it was a (wonderful) account of one night; no more. there was no need for background information on kimiko, so she couldn't have "sentenced more in line with the story." really! "needs content improvement." tosh! |