| 2005-04-01 02:57:55 |
Our Family and My Sisters Friends
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Good story. Work on punctuation. Simplify and shorten your sentences and it will be a perfect story. I almost become tongue tied reading it. Put more time into your story when you proof it, and it will be incredible. 8/10 |
| 2005-04-01 08:20:21 |
Our Family and My Sisters Friends
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Your GRANDMAOTHER?!?!?! what the fuck u pervert! |
| 2005-04-01 08:36:12 |
Our Family and My Sisters Friends
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Wonderful story!!!!!! |
| 2005-04-01 15:48:20 |
Our Family and My Sisters Friends
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Man that grandma shit was sick as fuck. |
| 2005-04-01 17:56:57 |
Our Family and My Sisters Friends
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I came really hard i didnt want to finish since i was spent |