| 2005-04-19 17:56:56 |
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Please continue it .. that was amazing! your a great writer! |
| 2005-04-20 00:39:50 |
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yeye niggaz! Dog, that story was good! Please continue! It was too short. |
| 2005-04-20 09:07:48 |
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i agree wid purity...it shud have more build up,,,,oder dan da build up...ur story was gr8...6/10 jss cuz of da short build up... |
| 2005-04-21 08:43:39 |
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awesome! Just the right length, continue!!! |
| 2005-04-21 13:26:30 |
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hey thanks for all your comments, i kno it wasnt a great start but this is the first story i have ever written and hopefully the meeting with the year leader should go a bit better. xxx |