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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-04-06 23:31:42 | Chrissy & Me | nice work, and the paragraphs were indeed well spaced as far as correctness goes, but please, make them smaller? reading online is hard enough with scrolling instead of page breaks and that damned AC current flashing the text on and off 60x per second. wave your hand in front of your screen if you don believe that, it's cool =). but still, nice work, |
| 2005-04-07 14:31:04 | Chrissy & Me | that was damn good so dont pe listening to them other fuck just keep writing. NICE! |
| 2005-04-08 01:26:25 | Chrissy & Me | Wow, pretty good story. I WOULD give it an 8.5, but I can't...I'll round down, 8. Very good...Capt. Morgan is right, plot could be better but it's very good none the less. Nice work. Write more, please. On an ironic side note, my g/f's nickname is Chrissy...you can imagine my surprise at seeing this on here eh? Luckily, she has no brothers! ^_^ |
| 2005-04-08 01:50:52 | Chrissy & Me | Oh fuck me and my girl fucked hard to that one she's still breathless. KEEP writing:) |
| 2005-04-08 04:23:05 | Chrissy & Me | excellent story,just try and make your plot a little more believable next time 8/10 |