| 2005-10-30 18:42:34 |
Megan
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Story started out good, but like everyone else already said, way to many times you used the same words like incestrous, lustful, and a few others. I think you should study the dictionary, b4 your next posting. |
| 2006-01-11 15:44:20 |
Megan
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Correction on the behalf of Wood67. Look through a thesuarus. If you have microsoft word right click incest or whatever and it'll show some other goddamn choices. yea..... |
| 2006-05-30 12:52:38 |
Megan
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Yeah, but it still is a pretty good story. |
| 2006-07-20 08:46:29 |
Megan
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dude i dunoo how many fukin times u used the word INCESTOUS ???????? it was a gr8 story but that word jus put me off |
| 2006-08-23 06:04:00 |
Megan
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yea you do use those words alot but its still a good story (trust me everyone has an opinion of how the story should have been written) but they still read them dont they. we all come here to read dirty hot letters and masterbate to them so you keep writing and we all will keep on jacking ok? I give a 10/10 |