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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-04-19 16:45:33 | My Sister Kelly | sweeeeet man but "YEAH" is right needs anal |
| 2005-04-19 20:36:35 | My Sister Kelly | totally fucken sucked -7 out of 10 |
| 2005-04-20 20:26:12 | My Sister Kelly | Good, i like. |
| 2005-04-21 05:14:37 | My Sister Kelly | Not a bad story but I'm afraid I'm compelled to agree the other who've expressed comments on your use of grammar and spelling (the irony of course being that they all used net-speak to convey their arguements). I've written a couple of stories in the past (nothing suitable for this site, however) and I've found that while on can uphold an excellent structure for an entire story without stopping the flow of inspiration, ten or twenty minutes afterwards to read over and fix up any syntactic errors can never really go astray. |
| 2005-04-21 15:18:45 | My Sister Kelly | Homegrown pussy....the best kind. |