| 2005-04-12 00:44:39 |
Extreme Brother and Sister Love
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ok, this story is rushed and suffered. ok one thing, some girls bleed when their cherries are broken. second, even if you started the flow, a girl is extremely unlikely to get pregnant during her flow, theres nothing for the fetus to bed into if she's flowing. died of the flu, this aint the 1400's anymore, come up with something else |
| 2005-04-18 20:40:27 |
Extreme Brother and Sister Love
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Are you fucking retarted man thats is not only the worst storry i have ever read but as if you r parents would just go " yup our kids are dead lets get on with life" are you like fucking 10 or something you fucked up shit |
| 2005-04-19 11:18:59 |
Extreme Brother and Sister Love
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I can't belive this, this has got to be the worst piece of writing I've ever read. I call it writing because it sure wasn't much of a story. Do yourself a favor.... STOP!!!!!! |
| 2005-04-21 17:30:55 |
Extreme Brother and Sister Love
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You do know that a girl can get pregnant before she starts her period Right? You also know that you don't know if your pregnant over night Right?? Obviously not because your story SUCKED BALLS!!! And maybe you should let your balls drop and have sex before you write another story |
| 2005-04-22 17:44:05 |
Extreme Brother and Sister Love
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hey man just do me a favor GO BACK TO THE ASYLUM and never come back |