| 2005-04-17 23:02:28 |
After School_(0)
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Don't rush things, be descriptive |
| 2005-04-19 12:20:19 |
After School_(0)
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bit short, gd but it could be alot better, go into detail and dont rush it set the scene, dont jst rush into it |
| 2005-05-03 17:36:19 |
After School_(0)
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It was good at the start, but the sex part was incredibly rushed through. |
| 2005-05-07 06:26:47 |
After School_(0)
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Magnesium doesn't blow up when it touchees moisture, only the Group 1 metals do that |
| 2005-05-16 08:32:20 |
After School_(0)
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Sodium blows up. Bring them back for more studies. |