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2005-04-16 02:36:49 | Maryam - Brown Eyed Girl. Ch. 1 | The first couple of paragraphs: intiriguing. beautiful. so incredibly descriptive. i thought the rest would be the same; i was wrong. your story went from "perhaps i digress too much?" to "oh yeah baby fuck me hard." consistency is key, my friend. most girls don't even like to speak during sex; leaves their voices hoarse. i know from experience. maybe write a part 2, and patch things up a little, eh? 6/10. |
2005-04-16 05:13:52 | Maryam - Brown Eyed Girl. Ch. 1 | Awsome Story!!!!!LOVED the hot indian chick!!!!!!!! 10/10!!!!! |
2005-04-16 14:10:29 | Maryam - Brown Eyed Girl. Ch. 1 | too much chat at start . not enough discriptive sex at end . BUT looking forward to part 2 . 8/10 |
2005-04-16 16:28:24 | Maryam - Brown Eyed Girl. Ch. 1 | ur one sick mofo u fuckin son ofa bitch i fucked ur mom last night, fucktard hahahahaha she was nice and tight most fat chix r hahahahahahhahhahahahaahaha... your fuckin gai u fuckin mofo hahahahahahahahahashaaaahha... i fucked a cow up the @$$ today and ti was tight and my dick was brown after it it was a good fuck then i licked the cows pussyz and it tasted good and i fucked the cow shitless haaaaahahahahahahah. that was my best story hope ya like it ya son of a bitch oh btw the cow story is truuuuuuuuuuuuue u fuck tard |
2005-04-18 03:16:36 | Maryam - Brown Eyed Girl. Ch. 1 | It was a stupid comment the pose before last made. I will admit, having dealt with one muslim chick in the past, though not as far as this, evidently, that it sounded very familliar, and as such, compelling. I have seen the same time of even speach patterns in the muslim woman I dealt with and dated for awhile. |