| 2005-04-24 20:03:04 |
Penetrating My Mother
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What a pervert... you're probably an ungly fucking nerd in real life if you can't even get a girl your age. |
| 2005-04-24 23:46:08 |
Penetrating My Mother
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hahahah...."A.Mom" i love you, keep it cumming....and the rest, please keep on reading, cuz love or hate, you guys finished the story and i appreciate that! |
| 2005-04-25 02:10:04 |
Penetrating My Mother
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Haha Awesome Story! Cept the Rape Part.. But Other wise great! and to all u who oppose it FUCK YOU if u dont like it dont read it DUH? simple as that |
| 2005-04-25 05:16:02 |
Penetrating My Mother
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I think you have real problem.You need to see a doctor.BUT the story was god. |
| 2005-04-25 08:31:50 |
Penetrating My Mother
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9/10. If this is a true story as you say it is then you're sick and you will be in deep trouble. If it is only a fantasy as I think it is then you are a very good writer because you can almost take us into the mind of the son-rapist. There are some spelling mistakes that can be fixed up easily but apart from that, pretty good writing overall and very subtle psychology. When will there be more? |