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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-08-31 00:06:23 | Penetrating My Mother | u'v read it olredi so b it... |
| 2005-04-23 12:19:24 | The Rave Party | i felt that the story was a little rushed |
| 2005-04-23 15:24:10 | The Rave Party | Boy! Way too short, I barely started swellin and the story is over. Cum on girl get in practice. i gv u 7 rudy |
| 2005-04-26 07:49:47 | The Rave Party | It's supposed to be a Rave Party, but what I didn't get the feeling as if I was at one. She got there, did a line and had sex. What kind of RAVE party is that, though don't think I'm being rude because I thought the writting was good. No errors, but there was no plot, nor story. It's like you were eager just to get to the sex scene.. Next time, let it build up before your char starts jumping on someones dick. |
| 2005-04-27 23:47:01 | The Rave Party | Thanx for the criticism, I'll work on it ok guys and gals, I read over it and I see what u mean, it is too short and there is no plot |