| 2008-02-13 23:07:22 |
New Beginnings - Pt 1 Ch 4
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Damnnnnnn!! Dan, that was awesome!! I agree with the others- PUBLISH, PUBLISH, PUBLISH!!!!!!!! Ur late but dear fan, *Allykat* |
| 2005-04-29 15:08:02 |
Luc & Jenny- chapter 6
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I see ur writin again, worst than last, too slick, not enuf desc.spend more time getting excited, bitch. i v'd u 4. |
| 2005-05-15 02:16:04 |
Luc & Jenny- chapter 6
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Well I love this story as I did all the others stories. YOu are a wonderful writer I can't wait until the next story begins. of luc and jenny. I hope you can continue writing and don't ever stop writing erotic stories like this one because i believe it fits you. |
| 2005-05-24 17:08:35 |
Luc & Jenny- chapter 6
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Well i liked this story can wait till the other chapters come. When are they coming |
| 2005-06-26 20:07:37 |
Luc & Jenny- chapter 6
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Very good... Glad to see the next chapters coming out... Plz keep on writing... as long as it makes ppl cum keep it up and dont let the critisism bother you .... 10/10 |