| 2005-05-06 06:22:34 |
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not very good too short in fact arrgh! please use a spell checker and bext time have the mom ot of the house and the two fuck. please add more description of the people (i.e. tabatha: blond hair, C cup u mentioned but what size, body e.g. fat or slim, etc) you must have these things in a story to make people give you top ratings. |
| 2005-05-06 07:30:27 |
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i thought it was ok but you do need to work on it! 5/10 |
| 2005-05-06 14:39:43 |
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great story, please post part 2 soon 8/10 |
| 2005-05-06 22:41:55 |
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it is interesting please continue i rate 10/10 |
| 2005-05-06 23:12:03 |
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Don't Like Kissing?... that is straight up bullshit... who doesn't like to kiss... other than that good story. |