| 2005-11-21 17:36:45 |
Brians lust
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eh its ok use spell cheak next time 7/10 |
| 2005-12-05 05:24:32 |
Brians lust
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A spell-check wouldn't help this writer. The computer doesn't know the difference between "would of" and the proper "would've or would have." Alas, despite the lousy grammar, the story was erotic and fun. 8/10 |
| 2005-12-08 06:52:33 |
Brians lust
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y do ppl bitch about ppl bein sick on here? they know wot the story will b like from the catogory. they need 2 get a life.... or a girlfriend |
| 2005-12-21 12:02:16 |
Brians lust
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this story has a great premise and could be built into an awesome series 'by just having mom tell brian i cannot let you fuck me ' but let me talk to my sister ' your Aunt Kathi and see if i can get that horny slut to come over and jack you off once in a while' because i've noticed her looking at the buldge in your pants lately and i'd love to watch my sister jerk you off |
| 2005-12-21 13:53:49 |
Brians lust
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Took long anough to get to the sex, hopefully there'll be more. |