| 2005-05-15 21:55:03 |
Paradise Valley 7, Hell For Breakfast
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not good as comments are saying, 4/10 |
| 2005-05-17 02:45:06 |
Paradise Valley 7, Hell For Breakfast
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From the comments I've received, I don't see any reason to continue this story. Thanks to those who followed it. |
| 2005-05-17 04:05:19 |
Paradise Valley 7, Hell For Breakfast
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Piss on them Sagetoad. I enjoyed a REAL story! Not just a jack-off joke of a story. Very nice work as far as I am concerned. |
| 2005-05-20 10:04:29 |
Paradise Valley 7, Hell For Breakfast
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you gotta be shittin me dude... u have that rating for a reason. Your story doesnt suck. If your not going to continue this story its up to you but i personally wouldnt mind reading more. The 2-3 story lines going on at once is awesome and your writing technique supurb dont give this up because of 2 iliterate assholes 10/10 |
| 2005-05-20 12:29:02 |
Paradise Valley 7, Hell For Breakfast
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really, I dont think it is that good, 3/10 |