| 2005-05-19 23:25:28 |
Jeni pt 1
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Good story 10/10 |
| 2005-05-21 11:34:35 |
Jeni pt 1
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Nice story and everything, could have made it longer, and its open to a sequel... make a pt 2 plz, and use our advice |
| 2005-05-25 11:31:22 |
Jeni pt 1
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very nice . Keep writin very good for first try |
| 2005-06-04 01:06:51 |
Jeni pt 1
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finish it w/ part two. What happens with amber man? If you get some threesome action going on there that would be sweet. great job. |
| 2005-09-13 13:32:05 |
Jeni pt 1
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excellent story...so you should tell me what happens next.....with me |