| 2005-05-19 20:18:48 |
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omg! that was like what happened to meh friend! sweet! shes gotta read this |
| 2005-05-20 15:39:21 |
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i wish somebody would fuck me like that :( anyone want to make me cum? |
| 2005-05-21 17:49:26 |
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hey jennifer id like to make you cum |
| 2005-05-22 07:15:19 |
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what a way to break her in |
| 2005-05-22 14:10:22 |
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Pretty good...although you gave away the ending about midway through, with "even in the face of the subtle warning he had just received." Better to leave the ending a total surprise, IMHO. Other than that, it was good. Dark, but good. |