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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-05-21 22:00:13 | Sex education_(1) | I need to work on my proofreading. I misspelled alot of shit in there. Please excuse. |
| 2005-05-22 00:36:29 | Sex education_(1) | I havta say it....I've seen cows that have turned me on more than this story 1/10 |
| 2005-05-22 01:02:15 | Sex education_(1) | To veovis I do not have a problem with women nor feel anxiety, stress or hate towards them. These stories are total and absolute works of fictions, I would never even consider doing any of these things in real life. I write. And to say that a story is not good and it is 1/10 are two very different hhings. 1/10 implies that it couldn't be worse. |
| 2005-05-22 07:14:24 | Sex education_(1) | Ok time for some constructive criticism 1. The story was way too short 2. It lacked in decent content 3 Not enough imagination or description (character description was quite minimal) 4 Use a spelling / grammar checker and finally 5 Remember, if at first you don’t succeed keep on sucking till you do succeed - and maybe get a friend to read it and give you feedback on how it can be improved before you post it, im sure eventually you will be a good writer and then will be able to be graded as such. |
| 2005-05-22 10:33:54 | Sex education_(1) | What they said. |