| 2004-07-22 23:48:40 |
THE INITIATION_(1)
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Nice up to end. Muffing and assdiving your mother ? Not for me. If you are still in counselling to resolve your Oedipus conflict, this story will set you back several sessions. Well written and sufficiently cumworthy if mom-son action works for you. |
| 2005-02-17 03:19:01 |
THE INITIATION_(1)
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It was a little hard to read with no seperated paragraphs. But loved it all the same. Im beginning to think that some of these stories aren't fiction at all, considering all your stories are mother/son based ;). I think father/daughter is more sexier, just me though :-P. 8/10 |
| 2005-11-23 09:19:27 |
THE INITIATION_(1)
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its a 2 hurred and 2 unbeliveable, the no paragraphs make it hard to read but some gud idea, well till the end :| |
| 2006-08-18 05:16:26 |
THE INITIATION_(1)
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Until you learn to use paragraphs your stories will never be as good as they could be. |
| 2004-02-12 11:49:34 |
Meek Mum_(0)
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finish |