| 2006-06-14 00:02:08 |
branded and used ( blue collar)
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cut out the death bit at the end and just have it that shes a fuck thing and its great |
| 2006-07-03 16:08:30 |
branded and used ( blue collar)
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ehhh..i like the anal..but the death thing is a big turnoff |
| 2005-06-02 03:32:37 |
Bone of Contention
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Fantastic story. perfectly written. Great twist at the end !! |
| 2005-06-04 00:51:18 |
Bone of Contention
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I second that, that was one sneaky twist, Great story, keep it up! |
| 2005-06-04 01:37:32 |
Bone of Contention
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That was really cool!! I gave a 10/10 |