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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2005-10-07 00:26:51 | Learning Mandy | Yes a few problems, maybe space out the lines so it's not just jammed in there and hard to read at times, a little better dialogue and a bit mroe detail 8/10 |
2005-10-23 14:13:39 | Learning Mandy | great story, came twice before it was over!... 10/10 |
2005-11-10 16:42:58 | Learning Mandy | "she could feel her pie getting creamy", LOL!!! Dude where did you come up with that one, that has to be the funniest and most perverted thing I have ever heard....10/10 for the story by the way. |
2005-12-07 09:57:28 | Learning Mandy | Have you ever heard of spellchecker? |
2005-12-10 13:09:41 | Learning Mandy | Hit the enter key every once in a while. No hymen? Still I got off though. Go on with your bad self. 8/10 |