| 2005-06-10 23:00:07 |
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Might I suggest that if you want to read something different, try Dostoyevski. If you're trying to find something new and different in the world of erotic fiction however, give up; there's nothing new under the sun and only so many ways an orifice can be filled. But if you just don't want to read my stuff, don't. I won't be insulted. Read some of the other great stuff on this site, or others. |
| 2005-06-11 03:59:32 |
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Bobo, you are a person of true character. most are to immateur to recieve an insult and not flare back. i also salute your interesting story here. i comb through many stories searching for actually intelligent writing and this is one of them. i enjoyed your story and found it to be interestingly arousing. please continue with this story, i would like to see where it all leads to in the end. |
| 2005-06-30 10:31:03 |
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very sily one dont u have power to fuck her urself |
| 2005-08-07 20:55:48 |
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People who give non constructive criticism should just keep it to themselves. Don't read something if you don't like it. |
| 2005-10-31 07:30:57 |
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Bobo, you have the gift! Keep writting!!! |